Sunday, November 23, 2008

Journal #18 Reaction - Writing


Edgar Allan Poe, who was known as an author of horror genre, wrote this poem The Raven in 1845. Although there were not yet horror movies at that time, this poem expressed well grotesque atmosphere just like Tim Burton’s film. This poem, which is composed of 18 paragraph, effectively conveyed the sound and image of a raven. The repetition of the words such as napping, tapping, and rapping, was weird like a raven’s cry. The adjectives like dreary, weary, and ghastly help easily imagine a black raven. As a result, this poem’s sounds and images made me feel fear of death.
A raven’s sound made me imagine death. The repetition of the word, “nevermore”, seemed like that the raven said it was dead. Also, the words like beating, repeating, and entreating made me feel nervous. It seemed like that this poem said we had to hurry because the death was the end. In conclusion, this poem was using strong internal rhymes, so I could feel different when I read aloud. When I read with an eye, I could feel not nervous but fearful. However, if I hear someone read aloud, I felt not only horrible but also tense.
A black raven was a symbol of scary and fearful death. This poem‘s atmosphere was dark, so it made angel shown as a ghost. The angel’s name was Lenore, and the repetition of Lenore made this poem’s atmosphere felt more and more weary. The death usually imagined the grief, but this poem made me know that the fear was more glamorous than the grief. After I read this poem, I thought fear feeling might be simpler and cleaner than sad feeling. Thus, this poem made me think the death was a very significant and elegant.

Friday, November 14, 2008

Journal #17 Anticipating Your Parents' Objections

Persuasive letter for buying a new car



I understand mom's objections for me to buy a new car. As you said, a new car was expensive, so we would have to spend considerable money to buy it. I concede it is a economically grand burden for us. However, mom, if I buy a used car, I might spend not so much money as time. A used car mostly could require a lot of money and time to fix it. Moreover, a new car might be a valuable property. In the future, when I resell the car, I could get back the big portion of paid money. After I buy a used car, if I have to go to the auto care service center to fix the car, I will regret. Do you agree with me?

Friday, November 7, 2008

Journal # 16: Confucius Quote

'Find a job that you love doing and you will never have to work a day in your life."-Confucius

I don't agree Confucius. Although I always think I should live following his thoughts, he is unrealistic. Mostly his teaching ignores reality, so it makes people frustrate.
Making money is a very hard job. Confucius' saying means money is valueless. How can we be happy without money! If someones have gifted talent, they can easily find their profession. However, most common people have to find a job to make money. If we want to find a job that we love doing, we may have no job. We can do something that we love doing as a hobby, after we work hard.